Oooh, that's a good idea. I know I need a gorgeous cover or catchy name on something for me to even look at it.
I like 'Brite' inside the star, too, it's just not consistent with 'Rainbow'. It makes it look like it's called "Rainbow: Brite", with Brite as a subtitle, you know? I might redo the whole thing, so that 'Brite' stretches across the bottom of the logo, creating a base for it, so long as I can get it the same size as 'Rainbow'.
What did you decide about picking it up?
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"I hope you know what you're doing, Rainbow."
"You still doubt me, after all this time?"
"I don't doubt," Krys said as he paused at the door. "I worry."
-Excerpt from my yet unnamed RB doujinshi.
"You still doubt me, after all this time?"
"I don't doubt," Krys said as he paused at the door. "I worry."
-Excerpt from my yet unnamed RB doujinshi.
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Yeah I get what you're saying about the star bit, but it does add something so if you redo the logo, I'd try keeping the star in it as well, especially since you're going for your own version.FanChan wrote:Oooh, that's a good idea. I know I need a gorgeous cover or catchy name on something for me to even look at it.
I like 'Brite' inside the star, too, it's just not consistent with 'Rainbow'. It makes it look like it's called "Rainbow: Brite", with Brite as a subtitle, you know? I might redo the whole thing, so that 'Brite' stretches across the bottom of the logo, creating a base for it, so long as I can get it the same size as 'Rainbow'.
What did you decide about picking it up?
As for the picking up thing, I'm gonna take it as you referring to your own. That sorta logo would be good with some catch cover art. The right sort of picture gets someone to glance at anything, if only to find out more information
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Oh, I'll definitely keep the star in it. It's supposed to be a compilation of the pieces of the Belt, which is why that last stripe's green rather than the blue of the original logo.Chibi Rachy wrote:Yeah I get what you're saying about the star bit, but it does add something so if you redo the logo, I'd try keeping the star in it as well, especially since you're going for your own version.
As for the picking up thing, I'm gonna take it as you referring to your own. That sorta logo would be good with some catch cover art. The right sort of picture gets someone to glance at anything, if only to find out more information
And yeah, I'm definitely aiming at having some great cover art. I'm still trying to figure out a name for the overall story, but I can't exactly ask for ideas without people knowing the story xD So, I'm on my own with that for now.
"I hope you know what you're doing, Rainbow."
"You still doubt me, after all this time?"
"I don't doubt," Krys said as he paused at the door. "I worry."
-Excerpt from my yet unnamed RB doujinshi.
"You still doubt me, after all this time?"
"I don't doubt," Krys said as he paused at the door. "I worry."
-Excerpt from my yet unnamed RB doujinshi.
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The idea of incorporating the Belt is awesome...I had wondered about that last stripe color! Guess I shoulda asked XDFanChan wrote:Oh, I'll definitely keep the star in it. It's supposed to be a compilation of the pieces of the Belt, which is why that last stripe's green rather than the blue of the original logo.Chibi Rachy wrote:Yeah I get what you're saying about the star bit, but it does add something so if you redo the logo, I'd try keeping the star in it as well, especially since you're going for your own version.
As for the picking up thing, I'm gonna take it as you referring to your own. That sorta logo would be good with some catch cover art. The right sort of picture gets someone to glance at anything, if only to find out more information
And yeah, I'm definitely aiming at having some great cover art. I'm still trying to figure out a name for the overall story, but I can't exactly ask for ideas without people knowing the story xD So, I'm on my own with that for now.
As for naming it, since you do plan to post it online to be read at some point, why not poll readers for titles when you do that? Give them a feel for the comic and see what they think...then you could either use their ideas, or combine them to create something totally different
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Good idea ^_^ I was hoping to post part of the written story here to get everyone's opinions on it. Usually it's when I stop worrying about the title and just get back to writing that the title will pop up. It happened while writing my novel, but of course, I didn't write it down right away so I forgot it... Luckily I wound up changing the format of the book and gave it a new title xD
"I hope you know what you're doing, Rainbow."
"You still doubt me, after all this time?"
"I don't doubt," Krys said as he paused at the door. "I worry."
-Excerpt from my yet unnamed RB doujinshi.
"You still doubt me, after all this time?"
"I don't doubt," Krys said as he paused at the door. "I worry."
-Excerpt from my yet unnamed RB doujinshi.
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I'd be happy to read and give feedback if you do that. Most of my titles just tend to pop up randomly...though it was a pain trying to come up with a name for my RB fanfic I'm working on... there were things I wanted to combine, but all the names sounded stupid...I can't even remember how "Shadow of a Rainbow" popped into mind, but I know I wasn't thinking about it at the timeFanChan wrote:Good idea ^_^ I was hoping to post part of the written story here to get everyone's opinions on it. Usually it's when I stop worrying about the title and just get back to writing that the title will pop up. It happened while writing my novel, but of course, I didn't write it down right away so I forgot it... Luckily I wound up changing the format of the book and gave it a new title xD
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Hehehe. I'd appreciate the feedback. Oh! I finished the study I did of the new RB costume design. I almost forgot the little star on her shoe, and luckily remembered it right as I was about to colour in her boot @-@
"I hope you know what you're doing, Rainbow."
"You still doubt me, after all this time?"
"I don't doubt," Krys said as he paused at the door. "I worry."
-Excerpt from my yet unnamed RB doujinshi.
"You still doubt me, after all this time?"
"I don't doubt," Krys said as he paused at the door. "I worry."
-Excerpt from my yet unnamed RB doujinshi.
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Definitely like that. It gives a much better idea of her redesigned outfit and I like that you included her with and without the jacket as well. I'd definitely be interested in seeing the other characters done in this style
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Good! 'Cause I'm doing Stormy next ^___^ Everyone loves Stormy. I have the old drawings of them I did a few years ago, but I've improved so much since then, that I don't want to show them o.o So. We'll just have to wait until I do the remakes.
"I hope you know what you're doing, Rainbow."
"You still doubt me, after all this time?"
"I don't doubt," Krys said as he paused at the door. "I worry."
-Excerpt from my yet unnamed RB doujinshi.
"You still doubt me, after all this time?"
"I don't doubt," Krys said as he paused at the door. "I worry."
-Excerpt from my yet unnamed RB doujinshi.
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I'd love to see your version of Stormy She's my favorite character. I saw some of the other RB stuff on your photobucket and it's still really goodFanChan wrote:Good! 'Cause I'm doing Stormy next ^___^ Everyone loves Stormy. I have the old drawings of them I did a few years ago, but I've improved so much since then, that I don't want to show them o.o So. We'll just have to wait until I do the remakes.
"If you're obsessed with your yesterday then you're destined to repeat it." - Ariel of Icon for Hire