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a fan fic, sort of

Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 10:57 pm
by WishBear2001
My toy collection has many different personalities.
Rainbow Brite Sprites: very child-like and bumbly in a manner like Lurky

Color Kids: it all counts on which kid it is (Lala is girly, Buddy is sporty etc.)

Hello Kitty plushies: very kind and helpful, but quiet

Care Bears: again it all counts on which one (Oopsy is clumsy even when he tries not to be, Hugs and Tugs usually get in trouble etc.)

Playmates/Hasbro Strawberry Shortcake: berry sweet unless you do anything to their clothes or dress oddly

Bandai Strawberry Shortcake: berry sweet, tomboyish at times

My Little Pony g3: it all counts on which one (Pinkie Pie is party animal, Cheerilee reads stories, Scootaloo loves sports etc.)

Disney Fairies : again, it all counts on which one (Tink is inventive, Fawn likes animals, Vidia is hard to be friendly with etc.)



I try to type captions to my photos based on this.

Re: a fan fic, sort of

Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 11:11 pm
by Chibi Rachy
Erm, this isn't a fanfic at all. This is only a description of your toys' personalities. A fanfic tells a story with character and plot and all the other narrative elements.

Re: a fan fic, sort of

Posted: Sat Nov 21, 2009 7:27 am
by J3llyb3ans
While not a fanfic, you could use this as your character guide and begin a story. Just use what you know about your characters and create a story from there. You may be surprised with what you end up creating.

Re: a fan fic, sort of

Posted: Mon Nov 23, 2009 3:30 am
by WishBear2001
WishBear2001 wrote:My toy collection has many different personalities.
Rainbow Brite Sprites: very child-like and bumbly in a manner like Lurky

Color Kids: it all counts on which kid it is (Lala is girly, Buddy is sporty etc.)

Hello Kitty plushies: very kind and helpful, but quiet

Care Bears: again it all counts on which one (Oopsy is clumsy even when he tries not to be, Hugs and Tugs usually get in trouble etc.)

Playmates/Hasbro Strawberry Shortcake: berry sweet unless you do anything to their clothes or dress oddly

Bandai Strawberry Shortcake: berry sweet, tomboyish at times

My Little Pony g3: it all counts on which one (Pinkie Pie is party animal, Cheerilee reads stories, Scootaloo loves sports etc.)

Disney Fairies : again, it all counts on which one (Tink is inventive, Fawn likes animals, Vidia is hard to be friendly with etc.)



I try to type captions to my photos based on this.





More thoughts on personalities below



2007-2008 PlayAlong, 2008-2009 Nanco and 2010 Hasbro Care Bears (aka AiCaL) -

bumbly and child-like, sometimes selfish/fashion obsessed, but usually snap out of it when Hello Kitties or Disney Fairies talk to them



Environmental Care Bears (1991)- As the name says, very "green" and kind to everyone and every thing even if others are bad



2003-2008 Nanco and PlayAlong Care Bears- personalities vary greatly, looking at the tummy symbol is dead giveaway for most



1980's Kenner Care Bears- almost the same as PlayAlong

Re: a fan fic, sort of

Posted: Mon Nov 23, 2009 3:49 am
by Chibi Rachy
As before, this still is not fanfic. Character guides are fine, but they do not belong in a forum meant for stories. Use your guides to write a story, as J3llyB3ans suggested.

Re: a fan fic, sort of

Posted: Mon Nov 23, 2009 11:11 am
by Sentcool
I totally agree with Chibi and J3llyb3ans.

Berry Bitty Guest

Posted: Mon Nov 23, 2009 3:02 pm
by WishBear2001
Sentcool wrote:I totally agree with Chibi and J3llyb3ans.

That is the reason I put sort of in the title.



Words I frequently use and the meanings

Cutie- bottom or rear end, a more polite way

Berry-very

unipeg- a unicorn/pegasus



Now for the good stuff.



Strawberry and the Berry Bitty Guest part 1

(the Berry Bitty so you can tell it's a Hasbro story, if you don't like the 2009 SSC or g3 MLP, don't read)



There was a mysterious smell in the air. It was harvest time in Berry Bitty City with the Berrykins working as hard as they could. Then suddenly they heard a thumping sound and looked up. It was not thunder, wind or rain because there was not a cloud in the sky. It was a giant purple hoof smelling of cherry blossoms stomping by and almost squishing the Berry Cafe. The strange purple thing moved to almost squishing Sweet Beats Studio and a worried Plum.



"Help, Strawberry!" yelled Plum at the highest voice she could.



That yell stopped the purple thing smelling of cherry blossoms and made her look down. She was horse-like with a horn on her head and sparkly cherry blossoms tattoed near her cutie.



"That's a pony, I have some books about those." said Blueberry.



Keep checking this thread for more.

Re: a fan fic, sort of

Posted: Mon Nov 23, 2009 4:29 pm
by SunSpire
Sentcool wrote:I totally agree with Chibi and J3llyb3ans.
Where the heck did YOU come from?? lol ... nice avatar btw! ;)

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Well, while I agree that this isn't a fan-fic, maybe she's just trying to gather character information to come up with her own story!? Let's give her a chance shall we? Wishbear, I suggest you do some brainstorming and write everything down in microsoft word or similar and then make a single post on the boards? That way you get all infos neatly in one place and not scattered around inbetween messages. If you are actually trying to get some input from others I suggest you ask where people can help you, writing random lines without a description or background info will only confuse everyone and it doesn't quite belong in this forum section. There's a seperate user blog for stuff like this.

Good Luck with your story.

"SunSpire"

Re: a fan fic, sort of

Posted: Mon Nov 23, 2009 5:04 pm
by Sentcool


Sentcool wrote:
I totally agree with Chibi and J3llyb3ans.
Where the heck did YOU come from?? lol ... nice avatar btw! Image

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Umm .. it was so boring at school, so i decided to look around a bit at the forums.
Thx.. its rufus @avatar

Re: a fan fic, sort of

Posted: Mon Nov 30, 2009 12:43 pm
by WishBear2001
"I read that ponies love sweets," said Blue.


The girls threw all kinds of food at the pony, but she only begged for more.

Strawberry baked a batch of cookies and the pony finally left, then bringing a pink pony with a balloon cutie, a white unicorn with a heart cutie and a purple and pink pegasus with a musical note and star cutie. The unicorn dropped off a giant basket of cookies and left, with her friends following her silently.



The Cutie (end)